Jon’s author diary – February 9, 2024 #amwriting

In this week’s Author Diary, join me as I delve into the progress of “Punks Versus Zombies” and the significant rewrites for “The Wolf and the Wyvern,” along with my current reading adventure.

📝 “Punks Versus Zombies” Update:
Exciting news for fans of the series! I’ve completed writing episodes 20 and 21 of “Punks Versus Zombies.” It’s been a thrilling ride developing these episodes, and I can’t wait to share them with you.

✍️ Rewriting “The Wolf and the Wyvern”:
This week also involved a deep dive into rewriting the final scenes of “The Wolf and the Wyvern,” book 2 of the Ravenglass Legends. It’s always a unique challenge to refine these crucial moments in a story, and I’m eager to bring you a more impactful and satisfying conclusion.

📚 Current Read – “Esrahaddon” by Michael J. Sullivan:
I’ve started “Esrahaddon,” book 3 in Michael J. Sullivan‘s Rise and Fall series. About 20 percent in, I’m still immersing myself in the story’s world and getting to grips with the unfolding narrative.

Stay tuned for more updates and insights into my writing and reading journey. Share your thoughts on creating climactic scenes in writing or your current reads in the comments below. Don’t forget to like, share, and subscribe for weekly insights into my author’s life!

Jon’s author diary, February 2, 2024 #amwriting

Welcome to this week’s Author Diary, where I share my progress with “Punks Versus Zombies” and the importance of rest, especially when under the weather.

🖋️ Progress on “Punks Versus Zombies”
This week, I focused on developing “Punks Versus Zombies.” Despite the challenges of feeling unwell, I managed to make some headway with this exciting project. I’m eager to share more about the developments.

🤒 Battling a Cold
Unfortunately, I caught a cold, which meant I had to slow down and prioritise rest. This week has been a reminder of the importance of listening to our bodies and taking the necessary time to recover.

🛌 The Importance of Rest
Being unwell has highlighted the need for rest and self-care, especially in creative professions. It’s crucial to balance work with health and well-being.

Next week, I’m looking forward to getting back on track with “Punks Versus Zombies” and sharing more updates with you all.

Feel free to share your own experiences with balancing health and work, or any tips you have for staying creative while recovering from an illness. Don’t forget to like, share, and subscribe for weekly insights into my author’s journey!

Jon’s author diary – December 22, 2023 #amwring

Welcome to this week’s Author Diary! 📘✨

🚀 Book Launch Update: I’m thrilled to share the latest on my book launch for “The Fall of Wolfsbane,” Ravenglass Legends, Book 1. The journey is heating up as the paperback version is now live! Plus, mark your calendars – the Kindle edition releases on January 18, 2024. Get ready for a captivating read!

🎄 Christmas Special on Substack: Don’t miss out on my festive treat! “Lord Sidebottom and the Christmas Caper” will be available on my Substack on Christmas Eve. It’s a holiday story you won’t want to miss. Check it out at joncronshawauthor.substack.com.

📚 This Week’s Reads:

  • “Endgame”: Diving into this revealing exposé on the British royal family. It’s an eye-opener!
  • “The Eye of the World” by Robert Jordan: Continuing my journey with this epic fantasy saga.

Stay tuned for more updates, insights, and bookish conversations. Don’t forget to like, share, and subscribe for more author adventures!

Blade of Wolfsbane audiobook is now free on YouTube!

Embark on an epic journey with ‘Blades of Wolfsbane,’ a high-stakes prequel to Jon Cronshaw’s Ravenglass Legends. Dive into a world of honor, secret fighting styles, and family legacies, now available as a free audiobook.

Welcome to the immersive world of Blade of Wolfsbane, a high fantasy novella prequel to Jon Cronshaw’s Ravenglass Legends.

This captivating tale, now available as a free full audiobook, is an unforgettable journey into a vibrant universe filled with courageous heroes and electrifying sword fights.

In the heart of the story, we meet Ragnar—a chieftain’s son yearning for his father’s respect. Secretly honing an unorthodox fighting style, he grapples with a choice: reveal his prowess in the imminent boys’ tournament and risk family disgrace, or submit to defeat. This epic tournament, a secret to safeguard, and a legacy at stake, sets the stage for a story that will ensnare your imagination.

Fans of rich world-building and high-stakes fantasy will feel right at home in the expansive Ravenglass Universe.

Embark on Ragnar’s epic journey today. Dive into the world of chieftains, warriors, and ancient traditions. Experience the thrill of the tournament, the weight of a secret, and the struggle for respect.

Don’t miss out on this exciting journey! Listen to the full audiobook of Blades of Wolfsbane for free right here on YouTube.

Remember to like, share, and subscribe for more immersive audiobooks. Enjoy the adventure!

Jon’s Author Diary – August 18, 2023

Join Jon Cronshaw as he revisits the inspirational streets of Ravenglass and shares exciting updates on the ‘Dawn of Assassins’ series, plus insights on his reading journey.

Hello from cloudy Morecambe!

This week was truly special for me. Finally visiting Ravenglass—where I derived the name of my main series from—was a moving experience.

 Walking through the very streets that inspired so much of my writing and exploring the beauty of the surrounding area felt surreal and invigorating.

If you haven’t been there, I recommend it—the place truly resonates with creativity.

Writing update:

In writing news, there’s a fresh treat for you on my Substack—a brand new short story which serves as a prequel to the Dawn of Assassins series.

It’s my little way of saying thank you for the continued support.

I’m eager to hear what you think of it.

Visit: https://joncronshawauthor.substack.com to find out more.

I also continued work on the fourth installment in the series.

I’ve been redrafting scenes I dictated earlier in the year and hope to carry on with the full first draft in the not-too-distant-future.

Oh, and another chapter for the Guild of Assassins novel is complete!

Reading update:

I’m still on the Horus Heresy journey. After wrapping up Angel Exterminatus, I’ve moved on to Betrayer—the plot twists and turns never cease to amaze me.

A little confession:

I sometimes feel overwhelmed by the number of projects I’ve taken on.

But paradoxically, while juggling all these tasks might seem slower, it’s making me more productive.

The key, I’ve realized, is to follow where my energy leads.

Yet, there’s a nagging reminder in the back of my mind to wrap up Guild of Assassins—especially with The Fall of Wolfsbane soon returning from the editor.

If you enjoy these updates, don’t forget to follow my journey on my YouTube channel and the ‘Jon Cronshaw’s Author Diary’ podcast.

Do me a favour? Hit that thumbs up, subscribe, and let’s chat in the comments.

Your thoughts, as always, are my inspiration.

So, until next time, cheerio.

Jon

Jon’s Author Diary – July 28, 2023 – Guild of Assassins, Horus Heresy

Explore Jon Cronshaw’s writing journey with Guild of Assassins, his current read – The Primarchs, and upcoming blog posts during his week off.

Welcome back to my Author Diary!

 In this week’s episode, I share my progress on writing my book, Guild of Assassins, with three chapters completed and a first draft for a fourth one.

You can catch these chapters as they go live on my Substack in the upcoming weeks: https://joncronshawauthor.substack.com.

I also delve into my current read – the 20th book of the Horus Heresy series, The Primarchs.

Please note, next week’s Author Diary will be a bit delayed as I’m taking a week off to recharge.

In the meantime, you won’t be missing out as daily blog posts will still be going live on my website https://joncronshaw.com/blog as well as updates on my Substack.

Thank you for your support and understanding.

Remember to hit the subscribe button and stay tuned for more insights into my writing journey.

So, until next time, cheerio!

Wizard of the Wasteland – chapter one (excerpt)

Experience the gripping post-apocalyptic world of Jon Cronshaw’s “Wizard of the Wasteland” in the first chapter reveal. Join Abel as he fights for survival, battles addiction, and encounters enslaved children. Discover a world of hope and despair in this thrilling sci-fi novel.

Wizard of the Wasteland by Jon Cronshaw

The stranger rolled into town at dawn, his cart rumbling through the gap in Trinity’s towering fence.

Abel squinted at the sun’s orange glare as it rose over the rooftops. “Come on, Pip.” He patted his thigh as a brindle-furred dog looked up at him and ran in a tight circle, her tail wagging. He passed huddled shacks as people gravitated towards the arrival.

Abel followed the gently sloping dirt track towards the entrance as Pip trotted at his side. Trinity wasn’t his home, but they always gave him a bed and meal when he came to trade.

Chickens darted in haphazard zigzags, confined by a line of wire mesh to his right, shedding feathers as they avoided the dog. The looming crucifix beyond the fence spread shadows across the rooftops. Children ducked past him, laughing as they chased each other.

A brown and grey mule lumbered forward, its head bowed as its rider brought the cart to a halt. The cart rocked on four rubber tyres. Garish daubs of blue and gold paint stretched along its sides.

Engulfed by dusty blue robes, the man dropped from the cart, reached behind his seat, and pulled on a pointy blue hat. He turned to the residents. “Ladies and gentlemen. I am the Great Alfonso, Wizard of the Wasteland.”

Abel joined the edge of the crowd as Pip sniffed around behind him, unconcerned by the wizard. Pip had been with him since he got off plez. She was the best reason he had to stay clean.

People stepped aside for Trinity’s priestess, Sal, as she moved through the crowd to speak to the wizard, her dreadlocks hanging loose from her hooded robe.

The wizard offered her a grin. “My good lady, am I correct in assuming that you are the Sal these good people have been talking about?”

“That’s right.” She folded her arms. “And you are…?”

The wizard removed his hat with a flourish and bowed his head. His skin was darker than Sal’s, his hair an explosion of twisted curls, streaked in black and grey. He raised his yellow-tinged eyes to meet Sal’s gaze. “Madam, if you please, I am sure my reputation precedes me. I am the Wizard of the Wasteland.” He lifted his chin, offering her a toothy smile as he spread his arms wide. “I am the magnificent, the splendiferous, the incomparable, Great Alfonso.”

Sal shook her head, letting the silence hang in the air for a long, awkward moment. “Sorry, I’ve never heard of you.” She examined his cart, running a finger along the whorls of paint. “Are you a trader?”

“Yes, yes.” The wizard raised his voice and a finger. “But more.” He smiled again and swept his gaze across the gathered faces. “What I offer is the wonder of the Great Alfonso’s magical extravaganza.” He threw out his arms.

Abel smirked as a few titters spread behind him. What was this guy trying to pull? He’d seen his fair share of chancers and conmen, but this was something else.

“Magical what?” Sal tilted her head.

“What I have for you today, ladies and gentlemen, is the culmination of many years of tireless research into the arcane arts of magic and alchemy, a glimpse into our once great past, now long lost to dust.” The wizard grabbed a handful of soil and let it fall between his fingers.

“I still don’t understand.”

“My good lady, you strike me as an intelligent woman, which is why I will ask you to be my first volunteer.”

She looked around and shrugged. “Okay.”

The wizard shuffled around the side of his cart, unbolting a series of locks. An oak panel swung down on a pair of hinges, bouncing for a moment against its supporting ropes.

The onlookers moved in closer as the wizard arranged apparent junk along a series of shelves—an ancient television set with a curved grey screen and wood panel casing, a fish tank, and a hand generator in black and brass.

Abel raised his eyebrows at the objects, wondering where the wizard acquired them. The electrical items would be useless, but some of those things were worth a lot in trade.

The wizard lifted a toy car from the shelf, its red paint faded to a cloudy pink along its edges. He retrieved a key and made a show of pushing it into the car’s rear. “With this ancient and magical key, I can bring power to this otherwise inanimate object.” He placed the car flat on the panel and turned the key, the mechanism clicking and crunching. The wizard muttered an incantation, closed his eyes, and wriggled his fingers over the toy. He let go. The car shot forward and hurtled over the edge, landing in a clump of soft grass.

A few people applauded.

“Thank you, thank you. You are all most gracious.” He lowered his head and returned the car to its shelf. “What you’ve seen here is just a mere hint, a mere glimmer of the extent of my magical powers.”

He took something else down, turned to the crowd, and raised a pair of binoculars above his head. “Behold! These magical eye lenses allow their user to see objects that are far away as though they are right in front of their very eyes.” He handed the binoculars to Sal and showed her how to look through them, gesturing for her to point them towards the spherical form at the top of the water tower.

A hush dropped over the crowd as she looked through the lenses. “These are wonderful. Where did you find them?”

“That, madam, is a secret.” The wizard tapped his nose with a forefinger. “Please, pass those round. Let the other members of your wonderful community experience this glimpse into the possibilities of alchemy and magic. But, please, do be careful.”

People took turns looking through the lenses. Abel smiled at the gasps of awe and the occasional burst of laughter. When they reached him, he focused on the wizard rifling around one of the shelves. He looked down at a tug to his elbow.

A kid jumped up and down with eager excitement, clapping his hands and staring at the binoculars. He handed them to the boy, took a moment to show him how to use them, and turned his attention back to the wizard.

The wizard held up a light bulb. “As you will observe, this is a simple globe of glass. I would offer to hand this round so you can witness for yourself my ingenious design. But, because the magic is so powerful and so very dangerous, I will instead ask that you all take a few paces back to give me room to perform this most incredible and delicate of feats.”

He placed the light bulb on the panel and checked the wires were connected to the hand generator. He stepped over to the dynamo and muttered an incantation with a raised chin and half-closed eyes.

Smiling to the crowd, he wound the handle.

A low hum and sharp crackle of electricity emanated from the generator as he turned the handle.

A scattering of gasps spread around the wizard as the light bulb glowed a brownish-yellow.

“As you can see, with this ancient magic, I have created fire within this glass. I’m sure you will agree that this might be the most marvellous, magnificent, magical accomplishment you have ever had the good fortune to witness.”

He stopped abruptly, sweeping his gaze across the crowd, now rapt. He raised his right forefinger with a sudden jerk. “Oh, but there is more.” He made a dramatic turn, his robes billowing in an expanse of dusty blue.

The crowd moved forward with hesitant steps as they strained to get a closer look.

The wizard disconnected the wires from the light bulb, placed it in a pot filled with cloths on the middle shelf, and connected the wires to the television. He turned back to the crowd, spreading his arms wide. “I must ask again that you take a few steps back. This is very ancient and powerful magic. What I am about to show you is the most amazing sight. Where are the magical lenses?” He waited a few moments for the binoculars to return to him. He looked through them, smiled again, and placed them on a shelf. “With those lenses, you were able to make objects far away seem as though they were close enough to touch. Using the same principles, I have devised and constructed a magical box that allows you to see over great distances to lands to the west, beyond the lawless zone.”

He reached for the hand generator and cranked the handle again.

The belt hummed, crackling and sparking as the smell of burning rubber filled the air.

He leaned over to the television set, muttered a spell, pushed a button, and kept turning the handle.

White noise hissed from the television’s speaker as the screen came to life in a random array of white, black, and grey—a dead signal. “As you could see, ladies and gentlemen, what we are witnessing is a window into another land, another land shrouded in—what is it?” He tilted his head and rubbed his chin. “A dust storm, perhaps?” He dropped the handle and turned to the audience with a dramatic shrug.

The white noise fell to silence, the screen fading to black. The gathered crowd applauded as the wizard made a deep bow. “Thank you, thank you. You are all too kind.”

“What I am about to show you now may be my greatest miracle, the pinnacle of my magical achievements.” His expression turned grim. “I warn you all that this is ancient and powerful magic and urge you again to stand back.” He reached up to the fish tank on the top shelf and took it down, placing it carefully on the flat panel.

He pulled out a green frog, holding it up by one leg for the audience to see, its body squirming as its free leg flailed wildly.

Stepping over to Sal, he dangled the frog before her. “Madam, please do me the honour of telling the members of your wonderful community what you see before you.”

She glanced over her shoulder and shrugged. “It’s just a frog.”

“It’s just a frog! Never has a truer phrase been uttered. So you will agree that this is a living, breathing frog? You agree there is no trickery, no shenanigans? It is, as you say, ‘just a frog’?”

She nodded. “As I say, it’s just a frog.”

Without ceremony, the wizard swung the frog against the panel. He waited with his back to the crowd for several seconds and raised the lifeless body for all to see. “As you will observe, the life of this frog has been taken.”

He turned his attention back to Sal. “Madam, would you like to take a moment to examine this frog, to assure the ladies and gentlemen gathered that this is the same frog?”

“You killed one of God’s creatures. I wouldn’t call that magic.”

“And you would be correct in that most astute of observations.” He offered her a slight bow. “There is no magic in killing a frog, but as much as it pains me to do it, as much as it pains me to take the life of an innocent creature, it was unfortunately a necessary component of the Great Alfonso’s most important magical discovery.”

The crowd looked on in silence as the wizard laid the frog flat. He took the wires from the television, attached the crocodile clips to the frog’s torso, and muttered the words of a magic spell, making complex shapes and symbols in the air with his fingers.

He turned to the crowd, made a solemn expression, removed his hat, and bowed. “Observe.” His voice dropped to little more than a whisper.

He stepped over to the generator and turned the handle, building up a rhythm until the belt hummed again.

The frog’s right leg twitched. The wizard wound the handle faster, smiling when the frog convulsed, its arms and legs quivering spasmodically.

Dropping the handle, he placed his hat back on his head and turned to the audience. “As you have seen, ladies and gentlemen, the Great Alfonso has brought this frog back from the dead.”

He turned back to the frog, now limp, and dropped it into the fish tank. He faced the crowd, taking in the applause. “Thank you.”

A few men shook their heads and walked away.

Children ran over to the wizard, jumping up and down as they asked him questions.

The wizard closed his cart.

Abel smiled at the wizard and weaved through the crowd, making his way over to Sal. “What did you make of that?”

She sniffed. “He’s clearly a charlatan.”

“Yep. But he certainly knows how to put on a show.”

“It’s just technology from before the end times. There’s no magic to it.” Her eyes grew narrow as a few residents led the wizard’s mule away to be fed and watered.

“I know.” Abel rubbed his beard, trying to understand her hostility. “But you have to admit, it’s pretty fascinating stuff.”

A frown spread across her face. “You’re not seduced by this fraudster, are you?”

“No.” His protest came out more defensive than he would have liked. “I’m intrigued. It’s been a long time since I’ve seen anything with real electricity.”

Sal nodded. “Perhaps.”

A tall man with pale skin and dark hair wandered over.

Abel forced a smile. “Jacob.”

“You look healthy. I take it you’re still keeping clean?”

“Yep.” He bristled at the implication in Jacob’s tone. He’d been clean for over a year, but it was the same question every time he returned to Trinity. They were good people, and the settlement was the best place to trade this side of the Grid. “I’m just going about my business as usual. No plez for me.” He knelt next to Pip and rubbed the fur behind her neck. At least she never judged him.

“Good to hear. God willing, let’s hope you can stay that way.” One corner of his mouth twitched as he turned to Sal. “What’s the plan with our wizard friend?”

Sal shook her head and sighed. “I don’t know. The residents are clearly taken with him. Might cause friction if we ask him to leave.”

Jacob cast a cursory glance towards the wizard. “What do you say? We treat him like any other trader and hope he goes by the morning.”

“I don’t trust him.”

“Come on, Sal.” Abel gestured towards the fence. “It’s hard out there. He’s surviving. It’s different, I’ll grant you, but he’s not raiding, or dealing. He looks like he’s probably clean.”

She raised her hands. “You could be right. But, I still don’t like it. This promotion of magic and mysticism doesn’t sit well with me.”

Abel smirked. “Just a different kind of magic to what you’re used to. You’ve got God, this guy’s got…” His voice trailed off at Sal’s glare.

She turned to Jacob. “He can stay for breakfast, but then I want him gone.”

Announcing: Guild of Assassins – A New Project on Substack!

I am thrilled to announce a new project that I will be sharing exclusively with you on my Substack page: Guild of Assassins.

Hello from sunny Morecambe!

I am thrilled to announce a new project that I will be sharing exclusively with you on my Substack page: Guild of Assassins.

This is your chance to dive into a world of intrigue, danger, and dark epic fantasy as you follow the tale of Soren, a young sculptor’s apprentice on his path to becoming a member of the Assassins’ Guild.

Set in the Ravenglass Universe, Guild of Assassins is both a standalone story and a prequel to my novel, Dawn of Assassins. Whether you’re already a fan of this series or just discovering it, this adventure promises to captivate you from the very beginning.

By subscribing to my Substack, you’ll gain a rare glimpse into my writing process. You’ll be able to read chapters of the novel-in-progress, and I encourage you to share your thoughts, comments, and support as we embark on this journey together.

Please keep in mind that the chapters posted may not appear in the final novel, as I often make cuts and revisions during the final draft. This means you’ll be experiencing an exclusive, behind-the-scenes look at the raw, unfiltered story as it unfolds.

Be the first to explore the shadowy corners of the Ravenglass Universe and uncover the secrets of the Assassins’ Guild.

Follow Soren’s journey from humble beginnings to his ultimate destiny and immerse yourself in a tale that will leave you on the edge of your seat.

So, are you ready to join the adventure?

Don’t wait—subscribe to my Substack now and begin your exclusive journey into the world of Guild of Assassins. Together, let’s explore and discover what lies within.

Join me now by subscribing to my Substack page: joncronshawauthor.substack.com.

See you on the other side!

Jon

Crucible of Shadows – chapter one (excerpt)

Experience the thrilling world of assassins and dark fantasy in Jon Cronshaw’s “Crucible of Shadows.” Fast-paced action, witty banter, and a dangerous gang await in this gripping installment of the “Dawn of Assassins” series. Perfect for fans of roguish fantasy.

Greasy sweat coated Fedor’s back and neck as he stared half-focused at the Rusty Sail’s back room wall. Peeling gloss revealed bare pine beneath, the wood’s knots and whorls shifting and expanding in time with his heartbeat.

His eyelids drooped again and the top of his head pressed against the wall behind him as a wave of pleasure washed up from the base of his spine, triggering sparks inside his skull, bliss mushrooming in his mind.

He breathed in another mouthful of smoke, its metallic tang setting his teeth on edge and unmooring his thoughts.

His muscles softened.

Burning flooded his lungs, the heat melting him to wax.

The pipe slipped from his fingers and his head flopped down onto the cushion, his eyes flickering shut, his breaths shuddering.

Something like liquid hands enclosed him, soft and warm and comforting and endless. The edges of memory caressed him—his mother holding him close to her chest, her cheek resting on the top of his head as she rocked him to sleep.

He floated in a pool of yellow light for a long time as colours danced around him, splashing him with love and beauty, every wish fulfilled, every problem, every worry, every anxiety no more than a distant contained dot, no more than an ant trapped under a jar.

The images subsided, melting into yellow warmth, dislocated from time…from everything.

His limbs disappeared, allowing him to drift—a formless self in the endless yellow nothing.

He became aware of another sensation, a sensation beyond his body, beyond the yellow.

A hand, a real hand, two hands. It gripped his shoulder, both shoulders, and shook him away from that place.

His eyes snapped open.

He focused on a familiar face for a second, tried to form a curse, and closed his eyes again.

Words struck his ears as if heard through deep water.

A slap to the face shifted his awareness.

Pain. Stinging. Heat.

He opened his eyes slowly, his hand drifting up to his throbbing cheek, and he met Lev’s glare with one of his own.

“Mate, what the fuck? How many times?” Lev’s features came in and out of focus. “Get up.”

Fedor’s head wobbled to the side and he mumbled something half-formed in his mouth. He just wanted to drift, to return to that place of bliss. If he closed his eyes for long enough, it would all go away—the memories, the pain—all of it would seep into nothing, become one with the endless yellow.

The shakes came again, this time harder.

He looked around the room at the other men and women staring at him and he met Lev’s gaze.

Lev reached down and hoisted him to his feet.

For a moment, he feared he might continue up through the ceiling, and float off through the lower city and into the clouds, joining the balloons and wyverns and seagulls as they glided on the breeze.

“Mate. Look at me. Mate.”

His attention latched onto Lev.

“No. Keep bloody focused on me.”

Fedor closed his eyes and sank back to the cushion.

Another slap came to his face.

He found himself standing again and tried to wriggle out of Lev’s tight grip. But his arms did not move in the way he wanted. “Leave me alone,” he slurred. “Leave me here.”

“No. You’re coming with me.” Lev cupped Fedor’s face in his hands and held his gaze steady, those dark pupils burrowing into him. “You can’t stay here.”

Fedor stared at nothing.

The slap came again and his focus shifted back to Lev and his breath, tinged with whisky.

“Look at me, you fucking dickhead.”

“Huh?”

“I said, look at me. You need to focus.” Lev gestured to the door, his words slow and clear. “I am taking you home. Do you understand?”

Fedor gazed longingly at the cushion, his focus catching the play of light down the length of the pipe.

Lev jerked him in a twist and marched him from the back room and into the main bar.

A thin man in a robe blocked Lev’s path and offered him a chequerboard smile. “Brother, your friend shouldn’t be taken like this.”

Lev drew his club and held it out with one hand, his hold on Fedor remaining firm. “You going to fucking stop me, mate? You want me to knock a few more of those teeth out for you?”

The man stepped forward, reaching for Fedor.

Lev shoved him back against the bar.

“Thirty-three, mate. This is a fucking thirty-three.”

“Wha—”

“I’m taking you home.”

Unable to protest, Fedor gave a weak nod, and allowed Lev to lead him away.

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Dawn of Assassins – chapter one (excerpt)

Embark on a thrilling journey with Jon Cronshaw’s dark fantasy novel, Dawn of Assassins. Join Fedor, a reluctant apprentice to a master assassin, as he navigates a dangerous world of life and death. With captivating characters and heart-pounding action, this is a must-read for fans of gritty fantasy adventures. Start reading now and get ready for an unforgettable tale that will keep you on the edge of your seat.

Dawn of Assassin by Jon Cronshaw

Gaslamps illuminated the flagstones with dull light, bringing with them the constant hiss of the Nordturm night. Fedor raced across Kathryn Square when a pair of patrolling constables disappeared from view.

He knew their route well, their timings, their patterns, their habit of doling out violence before asking questions. He’d been at the receiving end more times than he could count, but nothing left deeper bruises than a beating from the watch.

His gaze shifted to his crewmates, Yorik and Onwyth, their forms barely visible against the night, their whistles signalling the all-clear.

He gestured for Lev to follow him around the Mercer’s Company building, its walls glowing white against the moonlight, and positioned himself below the drainpipe. He’d worked hundreds of jobs as Lev’s second—sneaks, snatches, scams—all with the hope that one day they would score big.

Lev squeezed his shoulder. “You ready, mate?”

Fedor glanced up at the roof, his stomach muscles clenching. “You sure this thing’s legit?”

“Lita said so.” Lev pulled his hat down. “Who am I to argue?”

“I just don’t get why no one else has bothered before.”

Lev let out a sigh. “Let’s just focus on the payoff.”

“Right.” Fedor began to climb, his teeth gritted as he heaved himself up three storeys.

Cold wind blew in from the Braun Sea, muffling the sounds of the city below. If Yorik or Onwyth whistled the signal to abandon the job, would he hear?

When he reached the roof, he flexed his fingers and took a moment to catch his breath as Lev slowly made his way up the pipe.

Upper Nordturm’s rooftops glistened with the day’s earlier rainfall, reflecting the light from hundreds of dotted gas lamps, and the full moon staring down from the blackness.

“It’s higher up here than you’d think.” Lev stretched and gazed across the city. “You can see for miles.”

Taking care not to slip, Fedor clambered up the slate tiles. When he reached the roof’s apex, his eyes latched onto the weathervane.

It stood just over half his height—a black wyvern cast in wrought iron, its wings thrust back, no doubt to create the illusion of flight and a flat surface to catch the wind.

“You sure this is—” He spotted the weathervane’s ravenglass eyes, deep endless black orbs swallowing the shadows. “Wow.”

Lev rubbed his hands together and elbowed Fedor aside. “Look at the size of those beauties.”

“I still don’t get why people pay so much for these things. It’s not like they do stuff.”

“You could say that about anything, mate.” Lev cracked his knuckles, crouched next to the weathervane, and groped around the eye sockets. “They’re in pretty tight.”

“You got the bag of tools?”

“You’re a bag of tools.”

Fedor sighed. “Have you got them?”

“Yeah.” Lev reached inside his coat and pulled out a crowbar. “Just be ready if this thing pops out.”

Fedor listened out for warning calls from the others and stood behind Lev in an awkward half-crouch, his hands spread, ready to catch.

“This thing isn’t shifting.” Lev pulled off his flat cap, revealing curls of black hair matted with sweat, and dragged a sleeve across his brow.

“Maybe you need to cut round it.” He stiffened at an owl call—a signal from Yorik. “Shit.”

“Ignore it.”

Fedor glanced back over his shoulder as a pair of constables joined the square below. “The watch are about. They shouldn’t be here.” A breath caught in his throat. “Shit.”

“Screw the watch, mate.” Lev waved a hand. “They won’t see us up here.”

“They could. The moon’s pretty bright.” He glanced up at the moon and licked his lips. “I don’t know…maybe we should call a thirty-three?”

“Sack that.” Lev shot him a glare. “Mate, we’re here. No way they can see us.”

Fedor swallowed.

“And even if they did, who knows these rooftops better than us? Those waddling bastards don’t stand a chance.”

Lev was right.

Fedor just had to hold his nerve. He’d chosen his hooded tunic and leggings to match the tone of the slates. They were as good as invisible. But, still, the prospect of a beating and a night in the cells didn’t appeal to him. “Can’t you work any faster?”

“You want to try?” He offered Fedor the crowbar and cocked an eyebrow.

“No. It’s just—”

“It’s just nothing, mate. The quicker I can get these things out, the quicker we can do one.” He jammed the crowbar around the left eye socket, straining as he levered it back and forth. “I can do this.”

“It’s no good. You got any cutters?”

“Not here.”

“How about a saw?”

“Saw would be good. But, no.”

“Damn it.” Fedor tracked the constables as they strode towards him. “They’re headed this way.”

“Settle down.” Lev gestured to the square. “They’re not even looking around. They’re just walking and talking, mate. Probably not even on duty.”

“Right.” Fedor’s heart raced. His chest burned. Every part of him had to run, his instincts crying out for them to abandon the job.

“Yes!”

“You got it?” Fedor leant forward, ready to catch.

“No. But I think I felt something shift.”

“This is taking too long.” He started at the sound of flapping leather and spun to face a grey wyvern, its black eyes staring back at him. “Erm…thirty-three.”

“Mate. We’re not—” Lev fumbled his crowbar and shot to his feet. “Shit.” He charged past Fedor, shimmied towards the bottom of the roof, and slid down the drainpipe.

Fedor went next, a bolt of pain streaking up his feet and legs as he landed.

Lev let out something like a bird call, letting the others know they had abandoned the job, and led the gang back towards the lower city.

The crew reconvened when they crossed the Kusten Road. The priests had told Fedor the ancient road was built during the early days of the Ostreich Empire and cut a straight line along to the eastern coastline, stretching from Gottsisle to the north, to Wiete’s capital Welttor to the south.

During the day, carts and taxis crowded the road, but at night it stood silent, no doubt all in fear of thieves and bandits lying in ambush between Nordturm and Hafendorf.

Fedor followed the slope down to Lower Nordturm’s entrance. Wide enough for two people, its stone maw was smoothed by wind and time. The oldest part of the city stood beneath the looming Great Tower, the city’s interior carved from the cliff overlooking the Braun Sea.

Some say the city was carved from stone by Wiete’s earliest settlers, or shaped by Creation herself. Others believe it was once a great nest for hundreds of wyverns in the days when the creatures were as broad as ships and enslaved humanity.

Fedor was never sure where the truth lay, and if he was being honest, it didn’t matter. He had a roof over his head and a bed he could call his own, which was more than could be said for the countless street kids and beggars that made their homes around the city.

The maze of caves, canals and tunnels had been Fedor’s home since he’d been brought there as a young child to live with the priests of Creation.

Constables eyed them when they stepped inside. The familiar smells of damp stone and sulphur mingled with the ever-changing aromas drifting from docked ships.

Fedor’s skin prickled at the rising temperature as they passed through the hive of tunnels.

The others didn’t speak as they passed through the docks, its cavernous roof enclosing scores of moored ships.

Wind howled in through the sea gate, the giant portcullis structure catching light from alchemical globes hanging from the rocky ceiling.

Fedor followed a path between empty crates and fishing nets and turned into the tunnels.

He traipsed along the canal, trying to ignore the haunted waters, dark and black and stinking.

Nothing lived beneath that surface, though many things died.

He glanced back over his shoulder, checking they hadn’t been followed, and stopped at the den’s entrance.

Lev stepped forward and rapped on the door in his usual rhythm.

Yorik and Onwyth huddled together, their breath like clouds. Yorik’s broad shoulders and thick arms reminded Fedor of an ice bear he had once seen fighting a man in the arena.

An eye appeared through a peephole and the door opened.

Fedor acknowledged the crew’s boss with a smile. Melita, tall and slender with long red hair and bright green eyes, returned the gesture. His gaze drifted to the gold coin hanging from her necklace as she held the door open.

“Any luck?” she asked.

“Had to call a thirty-three,” Lev said.

“Oh?” She raised an eyebrow and gestured them inside. Yorik and Onwyth went on ahead.

“We were spotted. Had to be done.”

Her hand briefly clenched. “The watch?”

“Wyvern,” Fedor said.

Melita bolted the door and turned to Fedor. “Same one as before?”

“Yeah.”

Lev sighed. “You don’t know that, mate. It was dark.”

“It was the same one. I know it was.”

He followed Lev and Melita through the vestibule and along a winding tunnel to the common room.

No more than ten paces across, its walls curved into the ceiling. The glow from an alchemical tube cast crooked shadows along the rock.

A pair of sofas pressed against the opposite wall.

A gaming table stood to the door’s right.

Fedor flopped down onto the nearest sofa and forced a smile at the others. He hated returning from a job empty-handed.

Yorik leant back on the other sofa, his skin pale, his thick red beard a stark contrast to his thinning brown hair. “What happened?” He spoke in a clipped Molotok accent. “Why thirty-three?”

“I saw that wyvern again.”

Yorik folded his arms and leant back, his top lip curling. “Is not good.”

Fedor shrugged. “What am I supposed to do?”

“You keep seeing wyvern. How do you know it is same?”

“I just do.”

Onwyth sniffed and turned from her seat at the gaming table. She bore the dark tones of the Southern Isles and wore her ash-dyed saltlocks loose down her back. She held Fedor’s gaze. “How many times has that been now?”

Fedor glanced down at his hands and shrugged. “I don’t know.”

“What does it want? It’s like every time we do a job, you keep seeing that…that thing.”

“It’s not every job.” His voice came out higher than he would have liked. “It’s just been a few lately.”

“It’s too many.” Onwyth scrunched her nose. “Don’t you just hate wyverns?”

“I don’t know why it keeps following us.” Fedor blinked up at the ceiling and let out a sigh. “But what can we do? It just appears from nowhere.”

“You should turn the tables.” Onwyth leant forward, her right hand closing into a fist. “You should go after it. Let the hunter become the hunted. I bet you could get a pistol or a harpoon, and then next time you see it, you could shoot it, and then you won’t have any excuse to call thirty-threes all the time. You’d probably even get a few coin for a wyvern skin.”

Fedor glared at her. “I’m a thief, not a killer.”

“Wyverns aren’t people.” She waved a hand. “You’d kill a rat, wouldn’t you?”

“Not really.”

“I would.” She grinned. “I love killing rats. I see them all the time by the canal.” She gestured towards the den’s entrance. “If you grab one of the big ones by the tail, you can smash it against a wall. It makes a great noise. Bit like a squashy kind of thud.”

“I think rats are a bit different to wyverns.”

“They’re basically just flying rats.”

“With scales,” Fedor said.

“More like flying bats, then.”

“Bats can already fly.”

A deep crease set along Onwyth’s brow. “All I know is that they’re horrible slimy creatures that fly around costing us coin.”

“I don’t think they’re slimy.”

“They’re scaled. Scales are slimy.”

Fedor shook his head. “I don’t think they are.”

“Who cares? You’re missing my point. All I’m saying is that doing a wyvern in is no different to playing splat-the-rat.”

Fedor’s eyes widened. “You’ve got a name for it?”

Onwyth sniffed. “Tell me how it’s any different?”

“They’re sentient creatures.” Fedor shrugged and met Lev’s gaze, hoping he’d speak up. “They, erm…they think and feel.”

“How would you know?”

“They talk for one thing.”

She rolled her eyes and scoffed. “Parrots talk.”

“Parrots parrot.”

She gave him a confused look. “Huh?”

“They don’t really talk, do they?”

“I heard a parrot the other day at the docks. It kept swearing and begging for crackers.” She jabbed a forefinger down on the table. “That’s talking.”

“It’s not though, is it?” Fedor tried not to sigh. “Parrots just copy whatever they’ve been taught. Wyverns are just like people.”

Onwyth snorted out a laugh. “Yeah, slimy reptile people, maybe. How many people have you seen with wings?”

“That’s not what I mean.”

“They’re no better than rats. They’re getting in the way of our jobs. I say you get yourself a sack and a club and take that thing out once and for all.”

Fedor sighed. “I repeat, I’m not a killer.”

“Perhaps you trap it in net,” Yorik said. “Not kill it, but give it beating.”

“Or smash its wings.” Onwyth jumped to her feet. “Or snap its legs.”

Fedor shook his head. “I’m not going to do that.”

Lev grinned and drummed a rhythm on the sofa’s arm. “You know he’d only find something else to blame if he did.”

“Yeah.” Onwyth pointed at him. “Oh, no. There’s a rat. Thirty-three. Thirty-three. I don’t like how that parrot’s looking at me. Thirty-three.”

Fedor huffed and folded his arms. “That’s not fair.”

“Whatever.” Lev removed his cap and pursed his lips. “You’ve got to take risks in this line of work, mate. It’s almost like I didn’t teach you shit.”

“There’s risks and then there’s risks. I’m not taking unnecessary ones. They’re unnecessary for a reason.”

“Risk nothing and you risk everything, mate.”

Fedor glared at him. “You were down that drainpipe before I’d even had chance to move.”

“Yeah.” Lev raised a finger. “But only because you called a thirty-three.”

Yorik raked a hand down his beard. “And it was necessary call, huh?”

Melita cleared her throat from the doorway and raised her chin. “If he called a thirty-three, he called a thirty-three.” She narrowed her eyes at Yorik. “Do you understand?”

“Yes, boss. I just—”

“That’s the beginning and end of the discussion.” She stepped into the common room and sat on the sofa to Fedor’s left. “If we don’t keep that as a sacred part of our code, then we may as well walk away.”

“I agree.” Yorik’s head rocked from side to side. “But there are other things to consider—”

“No. There aren’t.” She held Yorik’s gaze. “We need to trust each other’s judgement.”

Yorik’s neck stiffened. “Fedor should toughen up. He calls most thirty-threes.”

Fedor’s mouth dropped open. “That’s only because I’m usually Lev’s second.”

“That’s enough.” Melita glared at Yorik and Fedor before relaxing into an easy smile and turning to Lev. “What did we learn from the job?”

“There’s two ravenglass orbs up there, each as big as a fist.”

“So, they’re real?”

“Yeah.”

“What went wrong?”

“Apart from the wyvern?”

She gave a slight nod.

“I don’t know.” Lev shrugged one shoulder. “That was it, really. Wyvern scuppered our game…again.”

“Tools,” Fedor said. “We need something better to cut the eyes out.”

“What did you use?”

“Crowbar,” Lev said

“To prise wrought iron?”

His gaze dropped. “Yeah.”

“And you thought that would work?”

“I don’t know. Yeah. Maybe.”

“On wrought iron?”

He rolled his eyes. “Fine. We need something better.”

Melita rose to her feet. “Good idea. I suggest you get another plan together—a better one—and try again tomorrow.”

Lev frowned. “Tomorrow?”

“You got something better on?”

“No. But—”

“We need the coin.”

Lev dipped his head. “Right, boss.”

“Good.” She strode from the common room.

Onwyth and Yorik followed, closing the door behind them.

Lev let out a long sigh.

“What’s up?” Fedor asked.

“I’m just sick of these shitty jobs.”

“Two ravenglass orbs. I’d say that’s at least, what, five hundred krones?”

“What’s that halved and split between five? We need something bigger, mate. Much bigger.” He banged his head back against the sofa. “How long we been doing this?”

Fedor shrugged. “Dunno. Four years, maybe.”

“And where we at?” His fists curled tight.

“We’ve got a lot more than some out there.”

“All I’ve got to my name is what’s in my purse. How are we supposed to get out of this shit-hole if we keep doing small-time jobs?” He ran a hand back through his hair. “Every time one of us calls a thirty-three, it’s like everything gets shoved back another day. I’m just sick of it, mate.”

“So, what? We get caught by the watch? I don’t know about you, but I’m not really interested in the mines or the gibbet.”

“That’s not what I mean. I just think…I just think we deserve better.”

“It’s alright here. At least we’ve got a roof over our heads. We never go hungry.”

“That’s just surviving, mate. I don’t know about you, but I want more.”

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